Monday, August 15, 2005

One other thing

I added a poem to my xanga, so yeah. Read it. Right after you read the post right below this one.

5 Comments:

Blogger AJ Harbison said...

I know what it is! I know what it is! I know! I know!

::smiles smugly::

I liked the poem. You have a really good sense of time, and timing. Also a good sense of unfolding. Your poetry is musical, in a sense, at least in the way that I understand it. I guess, what I really am trying to say is that you have a good sense of form, which is always defined by my music teachers as "the balance of repetition and contrast." Your use of repetition is very skilled, and that I think is what really makes your poetry style flow very nicely.

Rae's interpretation was interesting. Too bad it was wrong. Heh heh. :p

Oh, "illeteration" should actually be "alliteration." Sorry, couldn't help it.

Looking forward to more in the future!

AJ
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3:46 PM  
Blogger Raelynn Ann said...

hey poop face! (aj) i know what he was getting at :P i was adding in my own ..::glare::..

sniff...
dont make funna-me

3:52 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Boy, sometimes one wonders if Mark still realizes that he has people who come to his blog very often expecting to see a new post or two and are crushed, disappointed, and feel as though their whole day is spoiled when there is no new post.
And in the you-didn't-respond-to-this-in-your-last-post-and-you'd-better-respond-to-this-in-your-next-post-(whenever-that-may-be)-category: DID YOU EVER SEE "THE INCREDIBLES"? I really hope you haven't fallen off a cliff or mountaintop, since the latter is more frequent in this region than the former.

2:09 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

You, having a semi-intelligent discussion? Wow. What had you been smoking? Did you video-tape the conversation? Is there some other way of proving to me that this really occured? Sorry. I'm in a sarcastic mood, and there's no one else around to force my mood upon.

4:11 PM  
Blogger Idhrendur said...

You could always make up for the lack of his posts be reading my blog. Well, at least once the internet is connected in the apartment...

11:16 PM  

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