I know what it is! I know what it is! I know! I know!
::smiles smugly::
I liked the poem. You have a really good sense of time, and timing. Also a good sense of unfolding. Your poetry is musical, in a sense, at least in the way that I understand it. I guess, what I really am trying to say is that you have a good sense of form, which is always defined by my music teachers as "the balance of repetition and contrast." Your use of repetition is very skilled, and that I think is what really makes your poetry style flow very nicely.
Rae's interpretation was interesting. Too bad it was wrong. Heh heh. :p
Oh, "illeteration" should actually be "alliteration." Sorry, couldn't help it.
Boy, sometimes one wonders if Mark still realizes that he has people who come to his blog very often expecting to see a new post or two and are crushed, disappointed, and feel as though their whole day is spoiled when there is no new post. And in the you-didn't-respond-to-this-in-your-last-post-and-you'd-better-respond-to-this-in-your-next-post-(whenever-that-may-be)-category: DID YOU EVER SEE "THE INCREDIBLES"? I really hope you haven't fallen off a cliff or mountaintop, since the latter is more frequent in this region than the former.
You, having a semi-intelligent discussion? Wow. What had you been smoking? Did you video-tape the conversation? Is there some other way of proving to me that this really occured? Sorry. I'm in a sarcastic mood, and there's no one else around to force my mood upon.
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I know what it is! I know what it is! I know! I know!
::smiles smugly::
I liked the poem. You have a really good sense of time, and timing. Also a good sense of unfolding. Your poetry is musical, in a sense, at least in the way that I understand it. I guess, what I really am trying to say is that you have a good sense of form, which is always defined by my music teachers as "the balance of repetition and contrast." Your use of repetition is very skilled, and that I think is what really makes your poetry style flow very nicely.
Rae's interpretation was interesting. Too bad it was wrong. Heh heh. :p
Oh, "illeteration" should actually be "alliteration." Sorry, couldn't help it.
Looking forward to more in the future!
AJ
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hey poop face! (aj) i know what he was getting at :P i was adding in my own ..::glare::..
sniff...
dont make funna-me
Boy, sometimes one wonders if Mark still realizes that he has people who come to his blog very often expecting to see a new post or two and are crushed, disappointed, and feel as though their whole day is spoiled when there is no new post.
And in the you-didn't-respond-to-this-in-your-last-post-and-you'd-better-respond-to-this-in-your-next-post-(whenever-that-may-be)-category: DID YOU EVER SEE "THE INCREDIBLES"? I really hope you haven't fallen off a cliff or mountaintop, since the latter is more frequent in this region than the former.
You, having a semi-intelligent discussion? Wow. What had you been smoking? Did you video-tape the conversation? Is there some other way of proving to me that this really occured? Sorry. I'm in a sarcastic mood, and there's no one else around to force my mood upon.
You could always make up for the lack of his posts be reading my blog. Well, at least once the internet is connected in the apartment...
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